Review our iTunes Copy?

[Melin]

If anyone has a few minutes would you be willing to look over our iTunes store front? We are doing okay in iTunes, but I really feel like we could be doing much better with our Animation and Drawing app. I know this is a niche market, but I am just wondering with all of your experience if you are picking up on anything else we are missing? DoInk Animation & Drawing for iPad on the iTunes App Store

Thanks for your help.

[Sinecure Industries]

It's well written but long. Why not put some descriptions into the screenshots themselves? Currently, I have no clue what I'm looking at in them. Some bold, bright text in them could go a long way towards some leery buyers.